The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Dodsons Dream: Victor 3
We finish up with Sam, introduce Cindy's best friend Nancy, have an adventure in the bar "Slippery When Wet", finds out what happenes to Brandy, oh and finds out what Victor has been planning sense Chapter 1.  And thanks again to OddWerid for starting this series.
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Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

I am away from my iPad2. Without a good Chinese IME, I am switching back to English tynpig for now. When you compare the rule differences from various sources, you can assume my version is incorrect due to my lack of experience and research. I learned the game thru words of mouth from only one single source. On the other hand, yours is based on years of playing experience plus thorough research into century old references. Feel free to point out what you think is wrong on my page and I'll find time to correct them. One trouble with the demise of is that my page is duplicated at multiple archive sites, e.g.,, and even on the internet archive site. All these archived pages will remain wrong till eternity because I have no editing privilege to these archives. -- CP Lai

Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 2

Once again, the story was enjoyable, but please, work some more on your technical details, it would be more enjoyable if it were properly written. :)

Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 3

Still fun I loved the bar stool thing.

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Just love the huge pussy stuff. There aren't that many stories with explicit descriptions on those matters and I don't understand why. It really gets ME off. Thanks A.B

Benji Dude
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

Not a bad story there! It had a nice flow to it and your skills are improving with each new story. Keep it up!

Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

I like the storie so fare. I would like to see more.
I like the rang of style. Please keep it up.

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