The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Dodsons Dream: There are Benefits
The third story by myself in this series. THis tale focuses on the lives of six normal people who experence something that will change their lives forever.
Average Scores:

Moisturizer For Men
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 4

I would add something else, of course, but in fact almost everything is mentioned!...

Wayne Boich
Overall= 2, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

tYU9yz Post brought me to think, went to mull over!!...

Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 4

Definitely not for the faint of heart.

I must admit that I found the story extremely disgusting. Multiple dicks, multiple breasts, all growiung where they shouldn't be, etc... If you loke it, that's your choice.

Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 3

Your technical skills are getting better, but the story and descriptions still lack depth.

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

Very nice.

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 3

Really liked the idea of the image controlled transformation, you should expand on this :) keem em comming.

Benji Dude
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

Yes there is an awful lot of potential in the image controlled changes. We the people demand more! Keep up the good work!

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