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The Overflowing Bra

XXXecil
xxxecil@hotmail.com
Faeophobia Illustrated!: Spring Break, Part 3!
The magical Spring Break shifts into high gear as sinister forces swirl around your favorite fae; who are content to spend their time causing public, mass-orgies amongst the beach-going humans. Tempers and bosoms flare, as the Bra-busting chaos continues unabated. Those that would discover a very fun way to get out of jail have only to download this picturesque tale.
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Grey Deth
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

XXXecil, Excellent continuation! You can add as many chapters as you want! The 'world' you've created is a fascinating one and makes one wonder if your story would be much different if 'the real world' did experience the resurgence of magic in any form. I can't wait to see more of your world and the many Fae that 'uninhibit' it.

areader
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Another fantastic story! The pace is excellent, don't worry about the length. I'll love reading as many chapters as you write. Keep it up!

Festundtreue
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Excellent as always. Make it as long as you wish and I'll read it. Best descriptive BE and Preg stories around. Can't wait to see what Viviana and Caeciliiyanali give birth to in the end.

deux_anges
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

More pregnancy please, but otherwise excellent as usual!

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