The 2nd story in the spinoff serie that OddWerid started. Another test is performed. You get to see some action in the mutant slum at the Tentacle Tavern.
Side note: For all of you who note that I'm not a good technical writer, just be glad my wife spellchecks this stuff. Otherwise, every 15th word will be a puzzle to try and figure out what I'm trying to say. Oh and thanks for the rating, I like the feedback.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.00
- BE: 2.67
- Characters: 3.33
- Technical: 2.00
DarkHeart
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 2
Another fun romp, however I'd suggest working on your BE description and seeing about having someone with a decent working knowledge of english to edit your stories.
But keep it up! I want to read more. :)
basil_jelly
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 2
melons
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 2
its a great story but personally i don't like gigants ... - i would like to read more about people in the mutand slums and whats happening there
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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