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The Overflowing Bra

Hell-Scythe
Dodsons Dream: Victor and Susan
My first story.  You will need to read Dodsons Dream: Haileys Awakening or the story will make no sense.

Thanks to OddWerid for starting this series.
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 mikey
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 2 
Very good story, but you need to take more time with spell check.
 DarkHeart
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 2 
Some of the wording was a bit off, but I actually enjoyed this tory far more than the originals. It was weird and kinky, but a great deal of fun. I'd like to see the sequel. 
 Jamescuk
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 1 
Weird sorry, not my cup of tea
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