crash99@online.ie
This is my first story of, hopefully, many. It centers on a world where magic has caused some very strange sexual transformations, and things are going to get worse!
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.50
- BE: 2.92
- Characters: 3.17
- Technical: 3.50
Benji Dude
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Quite a good start to a story with a lot of potenshall. The odd typo here and there but nothing serious. Good effort can't wait for the next part.
mrletters
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Zod
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
Pleas write more! The story would be great longer with more drawn out descriptions. On the right track, keep it up!
MrNuclear
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Mongo
Overall= 2, BE= 1, Characters= 2, Technical= 2
Strange and badly written. Not enough BE.
DarkHeart
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 3
A good start, but more descriptions and background would be more than welcome. Especially if you're opening the world to other authors.
Phoenix
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 2
rudeypunk
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Good start. Positivly demented. Indulge in deeper descriptions.
Some Guy
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Great story. I hope to see more.
matt
Overall= 5, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
I liked it again and hope you do another one. Maybe try a longer story with more characters next time.
andrat2000
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
Good start, but much too short. The BE could be more detailed and the fucking scence, too. You should really continue this story.
Hell-scythe
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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