xxxecil@hotmail.com
"It will present hundreds of fantasy women, an army of sluts looking like each guy's walking wet dream! With enough of them, they'll have two or three for each guy! By the time anyone notices the truth, Tyra Banks will be sucking his cock already! And it'll be too late!"
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.56
- BE: 2.89
- Characters: 3.22
- Technical: 4.00
Yummm
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Excellent descriptions of the characters, admit ably the point of view does jump a bit, but the jumps are well noted.
DarkHeart
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
The story was well written, and interesting, my only complaint is that the viewpoint jumped around a bit too much at first. But it was a definite pleasure to have a story written in English and in a manner that was relatively easy to understand aside from my aforementioned issue.
MrHHH
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Heh. Obviously inspired by that old horror movie "The Blob". My only complaint was that there was minimal BE.
Festundtreue
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Its always a pleasure to read XXXecil's works. Since he's one of the few to write 'preg' stories I particularly look forward to reading his stories.
Grey Deth
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
I like it but wish it was more detailed in the process and had better character development. I know with a short story that is difficult to do. I did like how the ending was open ended so that more can be written. It would be nice to be more descriptive with all the people and their 'adventures'. Thanks for writing!
HorseRadish
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
A decent effort from an established and gifted writer. The perspective does seem to jump around, causing a little confusion. I got a big laugh out of Blob scene that was lifted from the movie.
benji dude
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
A little confusing at the start but turns into a pretty decent story, I think the perspective jumps a little randomly but other wise a good story.
deux_anges
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
Excellent descriptions and vocabulary but as mentioned already, a bit difficult to follow the many different characters and not much BE or preg.
andrat2000
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
A long listing of celebrity names isn't enough that I can enjoy a story.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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