A playful young woman seems to have her stomach in her cleavage. Her shocked male guest can't believe his luck.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.20
- BE: 3.80
- Characters: 3.00
- Technical: 3.20
Andy
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
I wish I could read this but every time I download there is an error. Could you email it to me at redneckandy@hotmail.com
HR
Overall= 2, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
It was ok. Straight to the BE.
Nickname
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This is one of the best BE stories I've read in quite a while.
The_Hype
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Straight to BE, sure, but it's good the whole way through, and caters (pardon the pun) the eater-BE scene. All in all, very enjoyable!
The Toymaker
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 2, Technical= 3
A bit abrupt, but a lot of fun. A little more setup would have been nice, and maybe not rushing through the belly expansion, as it seems to be important to the story overall, and rushing through it (for me, anyhow) makes it feel a little hurried. But on the whole, a definitely enjoyable work.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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