The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

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Bill and Bob
A Wishing Rock, Superpowers, Supergirls, Supertits...
Average Scores:
 BodyBuilder
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 3 
Ah, supersex!
 MrHHH
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 1 
Oh dear god, learn how to create a paragraph.
 Monkey Man
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 3 
OK
 DX
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4 
Not bad, could definately be continued
 buddyu
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4 
I would like to see a continuation if I could.
 SomaHolidaye
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3 
Hey dude, I would so love a continuation, and if you are taking contributions, then I would love to contribute. PLEASE WRITE UP A CONTINUATION, please!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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