The Overflowing Bra

Knocked $10 off the total price, due to our driving disnatce.  The owner, Greg, was very kind, polite, and professional.  He even worked overtime to make sure my computer would be ready in time for me to take it back to school with me.  I will definitely be returning with any future computer problems I may have.

I love this work. I hope you will work up a continuation.

these stories just get better and better.  i really wish this would really happen. 

I would like to start by thanking you for all of the wonderful stories that you have written for us to enjoy. They have always stood out as my favorites, be it for their content, style, or general plot. At first, my commentary will sound useless, because I have to say that there isn't much I could improve upon without venturing into the area of personal taste. After all, you are writing for a large audience, and the desires of one person have to be sidelined for the audience at large. That said, there are a few points that I will offer as constructive criticism.
First, more description of the scenes would be welcomed. Though you do make it a point to always let the reader know where s/he is, this story seems to lack detail that would facilitate in painting a more vivid picture of each scene in the reader's imagination. I am not asking for exposition on any absurd level. No, the purpose of scenery is to reinforce the actual action. Small inclusions of detail here and there, as you have done so far, seem to be the best method.
Second, format consistency; I like that you have chosen to use rtf as your format this time, since it is more compatible. However, as far as the actual formatting inside your stories, there is a bit of room for improvement. I specifically call attention to the large breaks between scenes; they serve only to make the reader scroll more, versus being able to concentrate on the story. The break lines are good. Please continue to use them.
On a positive note, I would really like to convey my enjoyment of your works. They are funny (especially some of the names you chose), well-written, and are engaging enough to make them worth reading a second or third time. Thank you for all of your hard work, and I look forward to reading them in the future.

Damn, I'm good!

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Excellennnnt....

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