Just a traditional straight-forward BE romp with an aggressive curvacious heroine.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.20
- BE: 4.80
- Characters: 4.40
- Technical: 4.60
Anonymous
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Mr HHH
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Fantastic! I hope to see more from this Author!
Very Good Karma
Overall= 2, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
The story was generally well put together. The author consciously skipped the usual set-up, for better or worse, and dived right into the action. He remembered why people were reading the story and gave good descriptions of the transformations. But I was horribly put off by that boy getting his hip broken. That sort of violence has no place in erotic fiction.
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I'm too lazy to leave any feedback. The most valuable thing a reader can give an author.
MrHHH
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Straight sex and BE short story. Thought it was great.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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