The continuing adventures of Ben.
This is a far superior piece of writing compared to part 1 and the large size is due to having both*.doc and *.txt formats, hope you enjoy.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.67
- BE: 4.33
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 3.67
Goddess
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Great story love you to make more
Anonymous
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Quite a good story all-round.
Myobpolo
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Love the story but there are a couple of things that need improvement. First spelling, spell check is great but only picks up misspelled words not using the wrong word i.e. ore instead of awe, now instead of know. And you use the same words over & over, nob is a good example of this. And jus MHO Rachel should have been aloud more fun on her power trip
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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