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Revised Edition, Parts now Seperated.
Julia uses a magic necklace to get the body of her dreams.
(still to be continued, far from finished)
Happy new Year!
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 5.00
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 5.00
JBitman
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
More good stuff - see extended commentary with part 6.
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