The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

L Elephant Schuez
Special Effects
Incomplete yet great tribute to Fret Pearson's work.
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 Gaffenheimer
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5 
An interesting story, and I see where you borrowed from Fret.  It's never a bad idea to learn from the masters.  Cheers!
 Inthralled
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5 
Great! Please, more.
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