The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

JR Parz
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Beach Babes
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RandomX
Overall= 4, BE= 1, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Excellent story, I loved reading it and it had fantastic MENT. I love when that is well written! However I'm not so sure this story belongs here. Am I the only one who didn't notice ANY BE?

DrBEMorph
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

I'm too lazy to leave any feedback. The most valuable thing a reader can give an author.

Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

I'm too lazy to leave any feedback. The most valuable thing a reader can give an author.

Mascot
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 2, Technical= 3

there was BE?
Good idea, and you could really exspand on it alot more. Don't sel yourself short.

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