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The Overflowing Bra

Raysyde
Rayuen's Journey: Rayuen's Awakening
Rayuen acquires his powers through a freak accident while investigating a fire at the Edas residence.
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Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 2 
The strawberry and chocolate breast milk was a nice touch.
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