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First attempt, be kind. Debbie buys a Tinderbox at a local store and unlocks it secrets!
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.43
- BE: 3.86
- Characters: 4.29
- Technical: 4.29
Above Ground Swimming Pool�����
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
I would add something else, of course, but in fact almost everything is mentioned!...
spurt
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
IceOwl
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Excellent story, when do we get to see part two?
DOOMSTER
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
It was a really good story
Anonymous
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I'm too lazy to leave any feedback. The most valuable thing a reader can give an author.
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
I'm too lazy to leave any feedback. The most valuable thing a reader can give an author.
pivokrtek
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
I'd reall like to read the 2nd part and other stories of this author
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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