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When Keely and Elisha have a accident at the chemical wherehouse where they work, they find that they can do all sorts of things with their bodies.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.40
- BE: 3.80
- Characters: 4.80
- Technical: 3.40
DarkIvory
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Very good, good charates, very lifelike.
The Hodrod
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 3
Few grammer errors held the only downfall to the story. I enjoyed reading it. Thank you
Anonymous
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
I'm too lazy to leave any feedback. The most valuable thing a reader can give an author.
Talon
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 3
Very good story. Nice descriptions, and good characters.
Anonymous
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 3
I enjoyed this story. Characters were likeable, detail was above par overall and generally well written work.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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