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The Overflowing Bra

Helen's Amazing Expanding Dream
Helen falls asleep on the beach, and some guys decide to have some fun with a heilum tank.
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Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Pretty good. The end made me laugh :P

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Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5

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Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Best story on this site.

Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 4

AN ok story

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