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The Overflowing Bra

Dragon6860
dragon6860@yahoo.com
Helen's Amazing Expanding Dream
Helen falls asleep on the beach, and some guys decide to have some fun with a heilum tank.
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 Dreginy
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5 
Pretty good. The end made me laugh :P
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Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5 
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 Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Best story on this site.
 Anonymous
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 4 
AN ok story
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