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A magical shop offers some interesting items to enhance ones bodily attributes (i. e. breasts), some with interesting side effects... (more to come)
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 5.00
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 5.00
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I'm too lazy to leave any feedback. The most valuable thing a reader can give an author.
jbiltman
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Hey, VirtualM, I'm really looking forward to your next installment. I tried to leave you some good feedback on you very well done part 5 on the BEArchive at MarkT's site, but the rating system there seems to have been taken down and my comments lost. To summaryize - nice job on the 3 acolytes and their changes, looking forward to seeing whatever surprise you've got in store regarding Francis, looking forward to more developments with Julia. Nice style and writing all around - I encourage your continued efforts on this story. Well done!
Zerg98
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
It was great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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