The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Quadhouse
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Keeper Part 5
Average Scores:

Drider
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Great story. Please finnish it

Bouncey
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

This is the best series I've read so far in this archive. While it does have occasional typos, it flows and fits together better than the vast majority of them. The BE lacks a bit of description, but that fits very well with the overall story.

firefly
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

id like to see more of this story

Bill
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

The Keeper series is great. You have built a world of magic, intrigue, and sexual fantasy that anyone would love to visit. The only question I have is where is the rest?

fizban
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

best storie i've read in a longtime

viperlord
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

The Keeper series is great, but i have one question where is the rest of the story?

quintiple_bus
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Loved it, Like the others I am in a fit about reading more. The story line is great and the good guy approach really works well. love the characters as well

Koroth
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

The Keeper series is wonderful

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