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The nanobots that BEU junior Melissa Swensen injected into herself have given her large muscles and even larger breasts. But she can't control when and where her changes happen.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.71
- BE: 4.71
- Characters: 4.57
- Technical: 4.86
StevieG
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I love this story. I've read it way too many times and it never gets old. Great action, great description.
Roid Abuser
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This remains my all-time favorite story. Gets me EVERY time.
Please put Melissa 4.0 on this website!
bstgate
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
What about Tara? Is she "infected" with the bots too, now? :)
im just me
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
make melissa 4.0 on this web site
Growthfan
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Love the consensual couples growth. Nice job.
MrHHH
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
It would be great if you could be a bit more descriptive about the growth.
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
PSST! Lab mice! Use lab mice! In lieu of mice, a stray dog or cat would have worked to test the body-modification nanites. Otherwise well written and seductive. On the other hand, I'm glad she experimented on herself.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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