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The Overflowing Bra

Greapos
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Big Little Sister Redux: Eclipse Revisited
A young man finds himself not only slowly shrinking but also the object of affection of his girlfriend's rapidly developing little sister.
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Dr. G
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Well here it is, the crown jewel of Greapos' work. Yes it is ripped from Dreamtales, but Greapos took the bones and gave them flesh. I still remember when I first found this story read it in less than 20 minutes. Brilliant work.

EtherealVision
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

I loved it! I've read the original, and this is just as good. I love how you adapted it, and turned the story to match your style. I can't decide between the two though, both are amazing.

Cloak
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

AWESOME, couldn't stop reading

Beetlebomb
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I'm...I'm just speechless, this is the best story a person of my desires would want. I could not suggest a better story for one who loves BE, and GTS. Major props to this author.

LooseCannon
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Incredible... couldn't stop reading and wanted it to go on.

LUCK
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

GOOD

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