TheClause2007@yahoo.com
A lighthearted story of human error.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.00
- BE: 2.00
- Characters: 3.00
- Technical: 5.00
SimonS
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
Great concept, very well written. The characters are lovable, but, the story is too short. The writer could have spent more time describing breast expansion, instead of jumping forward in time five years.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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