The Overflowing Bra

Nice story, but there's one big gripe I often have with stories like these.
In your story, you have the measurement 150-23-37. In female measurements, the top number (band number) has absolutely nothing to do with breast size; the top number (band number) is (ribcage + fat) circumference only.
So, using the 150-23-37 measurement, Jill would either have a huge ribcage or be very big up top, but not necessarily busty.
In a bra size, example 40 D, the 40 and D are completely independent measurements.

Sorry to go on, but this really bugs me...

Prophet Tenebrae summed it up rather well; it should be mentioned however that this story is VERY long, and incomplete; you should only read it if you're willing to take the time to do so. I would also like to add that it would be better if this were in HTML format, and that there are a few tags missing from the story(that is, the story contains the following elements but has not been tagged with them); lactation, non-consensual, multiple breasts, age regression, mental transformation, hypnosis(mind control, actually, but not much difference there), female to male(but only if you count trans-gender shape shifting, which I would), and slow.

One of the quintessential tales of BE.
This story - despite its age - has some of the BE scenes that I would still rate amongst my very favourites. Sadly the story itself is unfinished and due to the fact it has several authors, it's tone, setting, style and direction change repeatedly and toward the end one rather gets the impression that characters are forgotten or abandoned simply to BE more characters.
In some ways, the meandering style is both the stories greatest strength and weakness. It's what leads to the epic scope of the story but at the same time, it detracts from the concept of a central narrative.
This was also written in what might be considered another age, one where underage children weren't all that uncommon. Many of the characters are - chronologically - only 8 and that, for me at least, raises some moral issues.
Nevertheless the story provides a good insight into how stories once were... and it's epic scope make it a must read!