The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

King T
Unknown
Stoned
Out of all the magical properties crystals are supposed to have, I've never heard of this one!
Average Scores:
 BB47
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4 
Wish it was longer.
 Big Dog
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Best Story Ever!
 the man
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4 
It is good!
 DarkHeart
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4 
An extremely hot, enjoyable and well written story. Would love to see a sequel. :)
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