The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Eliot Cayne
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The Sorcerer's Book
Magic Books, Catgirls, Bad spells, Good spells...
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BB47
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Good!  Has fappability.
Guy
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Probably my #1 fav story, the only problem i have is that i'll never find another like it

JDawg
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Hands down one of the finest stories on this site.

Fake_name
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Definitely my Favorite BE Stpry of all time.

Kuro-neko
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Excellent! There were a few typos here and there, hence my Tech rating of "4", but nothing that I wouldn't make myself from time to time. Good job! ^_^

Hargle
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

When it comes to the actual BE, I'm hardcore. All or nothing, planet-sized or non-existant. The part near the end was good enough to satisfy my cravings, but Breast Expansion aside, the writing and story was BRILLIANT. In particular, the part with the "valve between the vagina and womb" was good. It's a shame that there isn't more stuff out there like that, and even more of a shame that I can't find anything more recent from you(like a sequel to this, heh). Anyways, Good work, and hopefully you will resume it soon.

-Hargle(who you will never be able to formally contact :P)

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