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The Overflowing Bra

NebtheDestroyer
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Sweater Problems
A magic sweater causes breasts to expand with milk.  
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Juliana
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
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Sucker4Boobs
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 4, Technical= 3

The grammar wasn't all too good, and the BE wasn't described very well.

sexman
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 3

Story seems to end rather abruptly. Should be classed as fast, rather than slow. Definite potential.

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