The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

NebtheDestroyer
Unknown
Sweater Problems
A magic sweater causes breasts to expand with milk.  
Average Scores:
 Sucker4Boobs
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 4, Technical= 3 
The grammar wasn't all too good, and the BE wasn't described very well.
 sexman
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 3 
Story seems to end rather abruptly.  Should be classed as fast, rather than slow.  Definite potential.
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