The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Randy
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Become One With Me
Finding an antique dildo adds a new dimension to Sue's fetish.
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Chris Yohn
Overall= 4, BE= 1, Characters= 3, Technical= 5

WARNING BLOOD!! That should have been mentioned. I felt very squeamish reading parts of this story :(

3pyon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Very Good Downloaded it back in 01

anonymous ver 3.14
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

An excellent writing style, with a unique (at least, compared to most other things I've read) story with a character that is more than just 'this happens, charater interacts, the end.' Just enough character, coupled with the right amount of detail, and well written enough to follow along, without being overly detailed, (which would take away from the story in my opinion.) Good stuff.

old shmoe
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

if you like nympho amazons with big tits this is the story for you

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