The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Noble Sword
Unknown
Return to Sweetwater
This is exactly what we need to turn people away from soft drinks.
Average Scores:

IBP
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

I really like this story. It's sweet, innocent and fun, with some great scenes of small-town life. I enjoy that the transformation happens without the overburden of a science plot, a magic plot or whatever. It's just there!

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BE Description (Detail, quantity, quality)
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Characters (Descriptions, likeability)
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Technical Quality (Writing style, grammar, etc.)
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