I was expecting a BE story with some story. This was more a story that just happened to have a large-breasted girl. The BE parts were to few and far apart to have any stimulation value. I would have been happy if her breasts were at least mentioned more frequently, or more central to the story, but this was not so.
The characters were done well, and the story was something I would have enjoyed reading even if it were not fo the BE. While this is certainly a plus, it's not what I needed.
Stylistically the writing was fine; however there were several spelling, and more importantly, grammar mistakes that actually detracted from the stimulation aspect of the story. It was also far too long for the amount of attention to the breasts. Adding breast scenes or shortening the story would have helped.
