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A girl gets a birthday card which tells her she'll get everything she desires on her birthday. Imagine her surprise when she finds it's literally true!
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.73
- BE: 4.45
- Characters: 3.27
- Technical: 4.09
BB47
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
fakejay
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
LostInCleavage
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
If a girlfriend who knew and was fine with her boyfriend's penchant for "Milk and Multiples" actually existed, the world would be a bettre place. Good job.
Benji Dude
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
That's a story! Great from start to finish, the characters werea little shallow but it's forgivable, as are the grammar mistakes. Keep up the good work and give us part 2!
bones
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Anonymous
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
A fairly good story with great attention to detail, though a little shallow character-wise.
R
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
Great! I want to see a sequal!
Rick
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
I want to see a sequal of this! You have a great story telling ability!
DarkHeart
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
Very well written story that showed alot of creativity, though I have to agree the characters were a bit shallow.
anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
I like odd transformations like that. the pace was good. Not too swift or too drawn out. I don't know if a sequel would be as good, but I'd be willing to try it :)
being you
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
one of the best stories i've read, love the origionality of the way in which the story flowed and would luv to c a sequal or another story with ur unique touch, keep it up
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