The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Unseen Unheard
Give Them A Mile, They'll Walk In Your Shoes
Like, the girls of Hooterville get bigger.
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Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

The ending was sad... so very sad... make it happy, with robin dying or something

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