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The Overflowing Bra

Swogrider
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Sorceress’s Apprentice
Seraphinae the Sorceress tells the story to her chosen charge, Isa, of her apprenticeship to her old Mistress, how she defeated the greatest evil of her time, and how her breasts got so damned big. Two parallel stories in the past and the present converge, both about a girl doing what she must to become the worthy apprentice to a master sorceress.
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 Chaddeus Thundercock BE Enjoyer
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Mmhmm, mmhmm, mmhmm. nods Yep. This is the stuff.
 DarkNZ
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Wonderful work, keep it up!  
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