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Seraphinae the Sorceress tells the story to her chosen charge, Isa, of her apprenticeship to her old Mistress, how she defeated the greatest evil of her time, and how her breasts got so damned big. Two parallel stories in the past and the present converge, both about a girl doing what she must to become the worthy apprentice to a master sorceress.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.80
- BE: 4.80
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 5.00
Owl
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Absolutely top tier work, genuinely one of the best bits of erotics I've ever read. Truly exceptional.
Hurkle
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
What clibretto said. Excellent story.
clibretto
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Wow. What a story. It's my favorite kind of BE story. It's wholesome while also pushing all the right buttons. It's technically sound and professionally written. I was initially put off by all the nonBE tags on the story, but the way those other transformations are integrated are incredibly tasteful and didn't detract from the story at all. In fact, quite the opposite. Now I need to go and read Codex because I somehow missed it when it originally released. Swogrider, you've immediately become one of my favorite BE authors and I look forward to more from you in the future. Thank you for such a fantastic story.
Chaddeus Thundercock BE Enjoyer
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Mmhmm, mmhmm, mmhmm. nods Yep. This is the stuff.
DarkNZ
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Wonderful work, keep it up!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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