The long overdue continuation of Olivia Part 1.
Story Description: Olivia moves in with her childhood friend after losing her job over false accusations of scandalous attire. Kinda a slow burn, so there's an outline and a table of contents if you're just here for the good stuff. Kinda went for something more 'wholesome' and 'realistic' (as much as this stuff can be, lmao).
Also: Very sorry about the 2 year hiatus, I couldn't think of what to do next for a while and just let it sit for WAY too long. I've been working on another story but I'm stuck on the ending for it, so if you want a version of this from Olivia's perspective, that'd be some welcome procrastination for me. Lmk over on Swelltales.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 3.50
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 4.50
wildcards
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I've enjoyed this story, things progress at a slow pace, I enjoy slow burn. Olivia rejecting the medication is a nice cliffhanger for a follow up chapter. If you do consider writing additional chapters from Olivia her perspective, it would be a nice touch if its not a full rewrite from her perspective, but overlaps with say chapter 2 and progresses in to a new chapter, giving insight to Olivia her vision and thoughts
anon
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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