When Mike wakes up one morning with a woman's anatomy below the waist, he has two immediate problems: getting through the workday without anyone noticing, and figuring out how to tell his wife. What follows is an intimate, unflinching account of a man learning to inhabit a body that has quietly rewritten the rules - and discovering that his marriage may be more adaptable than he ever expected. This one's a bit of a slow burn in terms of breast expansion, but wait for it and you'll be rewarded!
Average Scores:
- Overall: 2.67
- BE: 1.00
- Characters: 2.67
- Technical: 2.67
RebirthPublishing
Overall= 5, BE= 1, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Thanks Tigger for the thoughtful comments the repetition was intentional on my part as I wanted to explore the cyclicality of life, punctuated by extraordinary moments. I mapped out the timeline in detail before writing but perhaps missed something. Thank you for reading up to this point anyway and hope you enjoy the later chapters more!
anon
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Tigger
Overall= 2, BE= 1, Characters= 2, Technical= 2
Sorry this review was meant for rebirth not Brand, that has more direction but also slow and very similar..
Story is a bit frustrating, noticed some timeline inconsistencies, also it seems to be taking forever to go anywhere, and there is constant frustration between the women accepting things and lack of care and intimacy with his partner, and denial. So much potential but it just drifts in endless loops, with things happening and total denial, Seems like an AI generated chapter by chapter story, and a bit directionless
Such a good idea... So frustratingly written
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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