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The Overflowing Bra

JohnManTD
Master PC: Overwriting Reality - Chapter 2
Leo was an ordinary guy until he discovers a strange program... the Master PC program. It allows him to edit the people around him and alter reality (including himself). What will a young man bored with life use it for? Well, depravity of course.
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Anon
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I actually liked the AI images in the story. Maybe put out a version with and one without to appease those completely against all ai. 
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