Leo was an ordinary guy until he discovers a strange program... the Master PC program. It allows him to edit the people around him and alter reality (including himself). What will a young man bored with life use it for? Well, depravity of course.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.50
- BE: 3.50
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 4.00
Desra
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
I'll be blunt, I'm ranking this neutrally since I didn't read past the first little bit for reasons that should be about to be clear, but want to say this if you're going insert AI generated images, PLEASE say you're doing so in the description. I'm really not interested in works include them.
RedGhost
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Interesting start and I'm curious to see more. I'm unsure about the Weird tag though, but the detail in this chapter was good and the story seemed interesting enough for this free sample. I look forward to the next free chapter.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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