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The Overflowing Bra

RebirthPublishing
Brand - part 2
Caden Voss built his brand on biological determinism — testosterone levels, fertility rates, the hard data of what men and women are. When something begins rewriting his gender, methodically and without explanation, he manages it the only way he knows how: with spreadsheets, training logs, and clinical distance. What follows is a forensic account of a man who navigates his arguments from the inside, editing the research that now applies to him. Again, a bit slower on breast expansion, although faster than Rebirth!
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OdysseusII
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
It takes a certain kind of arrogance to not only post slop, but to give yourself 5 starts on overall, characters, and technical quality when responding to feedback
ABG
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
you're here, you want dopamine, we get it. but there's no positive feedback to be found. deviantart loves the AI slop, though, so try your luck there instead.
RebirthPublishing
Overall= 5, BE= 1, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Thanks for being one of my hundreds of readers on this site! Glad you found it worth your time to provide feedback.
MrEcks
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Despite no engagement except everybody downvoting your previous slop story into oblivion, you insist on continuing to post here and reducing visibility for real writers. Please go away.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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