David lives in the aftermath of making the ultimate choice.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.00
- BE: 2.00
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 4.00
wildcard
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I've read chapters 1 through 6 in one go, even though implants are not my typical story preferences I enjoyed the overall story.
Chapters felt a bit short, but it had a nice pacing going when being read back to back.
The overal BE description felt a bit lacking, leaving it up to the imagination of the reader.
The final chapter, felt more like a build up to bigger things with the SHAW5000 expanders not being a fixed size, things were left again to the readers imagination.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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