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The Overflowing Bra

TooBigisTooSmall
The Old Man and The CCs: CHAPTER 3
Dr. Cooper is beginning to be overwhelmed by the influx of new patients.  Maybe having Tanya over for dinner to meet Denise will help relieve the stress?
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anonymous
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
I didn't like the end. It felt like a rug pull, but it was otherwise decent. Not even a surprisecool rug pull, but a disappointment that tainted the earlier stuff.
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