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The Overflowing Bra

FrigOfFury
Summoning Trouble
You could say Pastor James Sero is not a very good man. After summoning a demon to deal with some gambling debts, you might say James Sero is no man at all. Is there any way back?

This one starts out rather cynical, perhaps even grim, but give it time to blossom.
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