An eager-to-please young man has been set up by a mutual friend with Grace — a composed, enigmatic, statuesque English lady. The date quickly takes a turn when she baits him into exposing his submissive side, and only gets stranger from there. But there remains the promise of something truly sweet behind her fluster-inducing personality... as well as something terribly concerning, when she suddenly seems to be taller than him...
(This is primarily a GTS growth story but features a healthy amount of BE)
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.00
- BE: 3.00
- Characters: 3.17
- Technical: 4.00
Ellie
Overall= 1, BE= 5, Characters= 2, Technical= 5
I couldn't get to the second quarter of the story.
The descriptions of growth are great. But I can't like Grace. Her confusing behaviour wasnt the dealbreaker, it was the straight up gaslighting. She did that more times than I could count on one hand, so I stopped reading.
didris
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Warning there may be some spoilers for the story!
I was concerned by the reviews before reading, but I am glad I persevered. This story was gripping in both a delightful and gutpunching way. The first half works as an exciting hook with little drips of mystery and intrigue. The descriptions of Grace's growth, while subtle, are exciting. The detail of her size and how she uses it are thrilling in almost all sense of the word.
The beginning of the second half made me feel so sorry for Grace. Instead of the wonder at the empowered sexual goddess, I just felt pity and sorrow for the severely depressed and emotionally abused young girl beneath it all. I was so glad for the last few pages that I genuinely felt relieved. The romance was delightful and I only wish we maybe had a little more of them as a normal couple. The epilogue was very sweet and touching.
Ultimately, this was a fantastic read and you are a very skilled writer. I really look forward to reading anything else you write.
Storm
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Honestly, it's a unique story. I liked it a lot, for a fetish story it's very interesting just from the plot. Descriptions of Grace, unaware of her surroundings, and her overall growth are pretty great. Also i enjoyed the authors style of writing English is not my first language, but still writing is remarkable for this type of literature. I was hoping for a good ending for both characters, but story is still great. Hope that author will write another story on this site. I will gladly read anything, that comes to his mind
CpjJwWHV
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
oik
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
To be honest, I didn't expect this. The first half is quite sexy, but the third quarter initially depressed me. It seems to refer to the real situation of a person who has not been treated properly all their life for psychological problems. If so, I hope that both the author and his friend are in a better place. I liked the ending. Normally, the stories on this website don't have such a developed message and are more about fetishes, but there's something more to this story. I don't recommend it for the average user, but the reading and the message behind it are worth it.
TT
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 3
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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