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The Overflowing Bra

Trilon
Bath Bombs
Sasha bathes with some special products to pump her chest up. All goes to plan, until she knocks the whole box in, and then things really get out of control huge...
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NoAds
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Shilling your site at the bottom is bad, feel bad!
Polk
Overall= 1, BE= 2, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Really just an ad for another site, complete spam and poorly written at that. Moderators, please delete this.
Me
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
An enjoyable little story, but... while yes, 17 inches is huge in absolute terms 2 soccer balls sidebyside, it doesn't match the size increase I expected e.g., exponential from an unknown but presumably significantly large number of bath bombs being added, given what merely two achieved.  I'd expect her to end up with breasts each as big as her own torso at least...
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