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The generational legal transfer of 'assets'.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.75
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 4.50
- Technical: 4.50
wildcards
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
A rather interesting and unique story setup, with regards to its method. That being said, I found growth progression some what lacking and dull to read, with the jumps in time progression and reference to bra cup sizes or on occasion reference to volume, a tad to simple for my taste. Overall still a decent story
RedGhost
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I quite enjoyed this story. It was surprisingly wholesome in its own unique way and I recommend it as a casual read.
Kruz
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
The story was great. I loved the interactions between the characters, as well as the growth over time was done very well.
highheelsbigbreasts
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
we are so back. I read and enoyed every single one of your stories. My top three are grandpas joe snakeoil, extraordinary reconstruction and time machine. This one might take the first spot.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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