The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Noble Sword
Unknown
The Living Will
The generational legal transfer of 'assets'.
Average Scores:
 RedGhost
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
I quite enjoyed this story. It was surprisingly wholesome in its own unique way and I recommend it as a casual read.
 Kruz
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
The story was great.  I loved the interactions between the characters, as well as the growth over time was done very well.
 highheelsbigbreasts
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
we are so back. I read and enoyed every single one of your stories. My top three are grandpas joe snakeoil, extraordinary reconstruction and time machine. This one might take the first spot.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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