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The Overflowing Bra

The Ethical Hypnotist
Open Source Part One
In 2065, body transformation is an everyday reality. With the power of ShiftX, you can look however you want, whenever you want - if you can afford the subscription.

Otherwise, have fun being poor.


In a world where you own nothing - not even your own face - one woman is forced back into the World's Oldest Profession to survive, using her ShiftX to transform into her client's wildest sexual fantasies.

But secrets from her childhood make Marisol Marquez the most wanted woman on the planet, and the MatraMax corporation will stop at nothing to find her and take her out.

But another group found her first; a team of chromed-up hackers who have created a free open source alternative. Their code will permanently break MatraMax's monopoly on shapeshifting - and Marisol is the only person that can get it onto the corporate servers.

Now she has to seduce her way into the bedrooms of the world's most powerful families and steal their secrets to set the world free - while a relentless troubleshooter hunts her every step of the way! 
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That was really something unexpected. I totally like this setting. Can't wait to read the next chapters.
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