Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.33
- BE: 4.33
- Characters: 4.33
- Technical: 3.67
Julia
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
There is humiliation in this story, which is not what I like. I had to stop about halfway, which is a shame because I like the initial premise. I took off 1 pt from Overall and 1 pt from Characters because this wasnt stated beforehand and I was irritated that humiliation was becoming more and more prominent. There are multiple spelling errors that involve homophone substitution. Those errors were distracting but easy to read through because context turns them into malapropisms. Perhaps the author dictated the story and didnt sufficiently proofread. Lastly, as others stated, the format was screwy. I had to open this in Apple Pages. I took 2 pts off Technical.
wildcards
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
I've enjoyed the story, it was a rather interesting read, but also a though one to read. My biggest issue is it plain text format being displayed as a wall of text and not the good kind. It lacks spacing, making it hard to follow and rather visually overwhelming.
Wishmaster
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Rly interesting cause of growth very well written
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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