A retelling of an old BE and transformation hentai by the artist N647, by its original author.
Alice is a slip of a girl, seemingly cursed to never develop. As she laments her inability to confess her crush to her best friend, a wish upon a shooting star brings with it an incredible transformation and gives her the courage to profess her love... And much more besides.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 1.80
- BE: 2.00
- Characters: 2.00
- Technical: 1.80
nonanon
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
The Industrial Revolution and its consequences have been a disaster for the human race.
Anonymous
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
ABG
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
if you don't want to write a story why are you bothering to post something your chatgpt client generated? try using your fucking brain next time.
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Very well done, the other guy is a hater of progress.
CleavageRomeo
Overall= 1, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 1
In the interests of full disclosure, this remaster of the original script was done with the
assistance of a Large Language Model or LLM, commonly mistermed an AI. About 30
40 of the text was written wholecloth and the rest was edited to a greater or lesser
extent, but it would be dishonest of me to claim full credit. I hope that withholding this
reveal until the end does not sour your impression of the story.
Yes, it absolutely does sour my impression. I would not read anything clankers had their arms on in any significant way.
Disclose this stuff up front so we can choose to ignore it if we want no part of it.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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