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Four teenagers find a strange magic statue of a stacked woman. Each one wishes for breasts bigger than the previous!
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.00
- BE: 4.67
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 2.67
Tomago001
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
Definetly my favorite BE story. I reread this story sometimes in chunks but most of the time I will reread this story all the way through. The characters for yhe most part are well established as far as who they are. As far what they look like before, Ashley, Corrina, and Zenobia are described well enough to get a visual representation as well as their feelings about themselves and their envy of Jessica.
The expansions of each of the characters are detailed and have enough body to be entertaining and erotic but not so much body that it begins to bore the audience. The girl's discovery of their expansion was also well detailed and had enough body to again be entertaining but not so long that its boring.
The grammar and lack of spacing seems to be rampant within this story, however unlike other stories, the mistakes look like normal mistakes instead of looking like an esl student's attempt at writing a fanfiction. I can live with that and still enjoy the writing.
Pacing in this story is a good medium pacing, nothing seems to slow or too fast. The story and characters are well established and so is the world they are set in. One thing I really appreciate about this story is that it doesn't try to focus on everything at once as well as it doesn't take 20 pages to describe a woman rubbing her chest. See Samantha's Colossal Bust
Overall I would reccomend this story to any fan of BE or just large breasts in general. This story is fantastic and is still currently my favorite writing.
45 Amazing!
Tomago001
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Anonymous
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 1
Terrible grammer and layout detracted from enjoyment; the current format available for download seemed as if it was ripped from a website and direct converted into *.txt form. It was so bad that I actually couldn't seriously read the story until I went to the trouble of fixing it up.
Anyway after all that editing I found this to be a fairly average story. While the detail regarding the BE aspect is alright, the characters were okay (a little bland despite the back stories) and the ending was so-so. Maybe I was a little biased against the story by the sheer mess that was the grammer/layout, but overall IMO this story while okay could be bit better.
Lingster
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
This is one of my all-time favorites. I just love it, and re-read every year or so.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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