The Overflowing Bra

Hi everyone, seeing the comments I feel the need to explain myself
1. I apologize that you felt mislead by this. Yes, this is only the prologue to the story. The other 30 chapters are exclusive content only available on my Patreon page. I should have made it clear from the beginning.
2. Unfortunately, I uploaded the prologue to the story, and only then I realized the title makes it seem like the whole story is available.
3. The platform here is such that once you upload something, you can't edit it, so I had no way to correct this unfortunately.
4. I do have free content available fulllength stories here, in my Patreon and on DeviantArt as well, so that people can read first and judge if they like it and decide to pay or not for the Patreon membership.

Again, I'm sorry for the misleading, it wasn't intentional but unfortunately I cannot correct it now, beside posting this comment.

Hope this clears some things.

Best to you all,
Commandlz

Hi everyone, seeing the comments I feel the need to explain myself
1. I apologize that you felt mislead by this. Yes, this is only the prologue to the story. The other 30 chapters are exclusive content only available on my Patreon page. I should have made it clear from the beginning.
2. Unfortunately, I uploaded the prologue to the story, and only then I realized the title makes it seem like the whole story is available.
3. The platform here is such that once you upload something, you can't edit it, so I had no way to correct this unfortunately.
4. I do have free content available fulllength stories here, in my Patreon and on DeviantArt as well, so that people can read first and judge if they like it and decide to pay or not for the Patreon membership.

Again, I'm sorry for the misleading, it wasn't intentional but unfortunately I cannot correct it now, beside posting this comment.

Hope this clears some things.

Best to you all,
Commandlz

As others have said, this is a commercial for your Patreon, not a story.

Look, I get that a lot of people want financial incentives in order to write these days, that's fine.

But don't fuck up this place by posting ads for your Patreon. Instead, why don't you post one story in its entiretybroken up into chapters if you likewhile mentioning that more are available behind the paywall at the start of the chapters and end of the full story. Alternately, you could post the first few chapters of somethingenough to reach a satisfying conclusionwhile saying that there's more to the story elsewhere.

That way you aren't gunking up the database with unfinished stories. You're earning more good will, plus you're showing to potential clients what a more complete story would look like instead of only the prologue.

This is just an ad.

An absolute masterpiece!

Writing is fine, little to no BE, set up is interesting too. However, is this what Overflowing Bra is coming to? just glorified Advertisements for everyone's patreon?

While not the most original concept and it doesn't have to be, I like the direction this could go. Just wish you'd post more of it for us to get a taste. There's no actual BE in this, just the promise of more.
I get wanting to rep your Patreon, but more than this would be nice to decide if we want to read it all or not.